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Title: Squared Stars
Author: [livejournal.com profile] dexstarr
Word Count: 100 x 5
Rating: PG
Challenge: [livejournal.com profile] grangersnape100 Prompt: Stars
Characters: Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
Author's Notes: Everything turns into a drabble series these days.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

***

“I smell the taint of a Mudblood,” hissed Voldemort, his flat nose sniffing along Snape’s neck, pausing at the exact spot where Hermione had pressed a desperate kiss before he’d left her.

“You did order me to seduce her, my Lord,” Snape reminded him, the words flowing effortlessly. “She is, for all her knowledge, still a girl. I have to be… romantic.” He sneered the last word, eyes dark.

The Dark Lord nodded. “What progress do you have to report?” He twirled his wand in his long, pale fingers, waiting.

Snape tensed. “She is extremely cautious; I need more time.”


***

In a very soft, very dangerous voice his master said, “More time? And will she be singing your praises then? Crying your name?”

“I do not care whose name she cries, my Lord; I just want information on Potter.”

“I will give you two more weeks, then I will turn to other methods of loosening the Mudblood’s mouth.”

Taking that as a dismissal, Snape bowed. “I will not fail you,” he said, and then turned on the spot to Disapparate.

“Not so fast, Severus. You need incentive.” Voldemort pointed his wand at the other man, red eyes gleaming cruelly.

Crucio!”

***

From the sharp intensity of the pain, Snape knew that the Dark Lord was very angry with him for failing to bring Hermione properly under his control. White-hot stars burst behind his clenched eyelids and exploded in the black hole of his mouth as he struggled to stay silent, to show no weakness in front of Voldemort.

As the Cruciatus curse continued to devastate his body, Snape felt fingers brush against his agonized mind. Urgently, he Occluded, barricading his thoughts and shoving forward feelings of scorn and revulsion as he gazed at a visibly lustful Hermione lying in his bed.

***

He’d never gone to her fresh from the Dark Lord’s presence, still clothed in Death Eater black, smelling of death, with Cruciatus aftershocks still attacking his nerves.

But tonight he couldn’t hide from her.

“Severus!”

She was awake, sitting up in his bed, a book open on her lap. She’d evidently been waiting for him to return.

“Hermione.” Carefully, Snape sat beside her. “We have two weeks.” His voice cracked slightly; he sighed inwardly at his weakness.

Her hair brushed against his robed shoulder as she wrapped her arms around him. “Shh, Severus, we’ll worry about it in the morning.”

***

Snape tipped his head back, looked at Hermione’s face. There was no disgust, no horror – only love shone in her brown eyes.

“Shh,” she whispered again, her breath tickling his ear. Hermione twisted around until she was sitting in front of him, arms still securely about him. She leaned forward, her soft lips soothing his bite-marked ones.

The fake feelings he’d projected for the Dark Lord faded in the display of her acceptance and love.

As Severus kissed her back, stars once again burst in his body – starbursts of joy.

Hermione: his North Star as he served the Dark.

***

Date: 2010-07-31 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reg-flint.livejournal.com
That was intense, gritty and realistic, completely IC for all concerned. You'll get no higher praise from me.

Date: 2010-07-31 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Wow, thanks!! I was honestly hesitant about it, been waffling over it for a few days and finally went ahead and posted it tonight.

I'm so happy you liked it!

Date: 2010-07-31 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reg-flint.livejournal.com
I particularly like the way you dealt with the Cruciatus curse. That and you captured Severus' Geist. (spirit).

PS I adore your 'Slytherins' icon.

Date: 2010-07-31 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
I got a lot of my icons at [livejournal.com profile] draconis_arts.

When I first saw the stars prompt on [livejournal.com profile] grangersnape100, I immediately thought of stars and the Cruciatus pain, so I'm happy you liked that.

And Snape is so much fun to write! :D
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Date: 2010-07-31 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
<3 Thanks babe! Glad you liked.

I admit, I have a soft spot for HG/SS, because it was the 'ship that got me into HP fanfic. So write it I shall!
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Date: 2010-07-31 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thanks babe. You're so supportive - I'm still so happy you messaged me! I just need to do some stuff longer than drabbles, already!

Date: 2010-08-01 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] supersonicchica.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this drabble, have you considered posting them to [livejournal.com profile] slyinslytherin, we're always happy when people post their work there.

Date: 2010-08-01 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thanks! I just joined that community a few days ago, guess I shall spam it with my Slytherin drabbles!

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