Fic: Pure

Aug. 8th, 2010 03:30 am
dexstarr: (narcissa-spinnersend)
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Title: Pure
Author: [livejournal.com profile] dexstarr
Word Count: 861
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: 100 Dark Fic Table: #41: Fixation
Characters: Narcissa Malfoy, Bellatrix Lestrange
Time: Set just after Order of the Phoenix
Warnings: Femslash, Blackcest, Sex
Author's Note: Whew my first femslash, and first Blackcest! Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] scarysnapey for an amazing, speedy beta job - I promise next time I won't hesitate so long before posting! Any mistakes are mine, since I've been "editing" it for almost a week.
Disclaimer: HP and all assorted belong to JKR, and are not mine.

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This is how she stays pure.

Slipping from her blissfully lonely conjugal bed to creep to Bellatrix’s room, lingering in the doorway, waiting. Blue eyes wordlessly begging permission to enter, slightly parted lips showing intention.

A flicker of black eyes, and a languid finger beckons – permission is granted. Narcissa glides into the room, into her sister’s embrace.

The path back to purity begins and ends in her sister's arms. With her sister's red lips on hers. With her head between Bella's creamy thighs. With her sister's hands tangled in her blonde hair.

Fourteen years ago Narcissa had waited for Bella to return from a night of seeking information; though the Dark Lord had fallen, her sister had remained fiercely loyal, committed to furthering his cause. But she had never returned.

Bella had always come when she said she would; and she had never left her little sister waiting for her, waiting with an empty bed and open arms. Narcissa’s first sleepless night of worry – and anger – had turned into fourteen years of loneliness and misery. Bellatrix may have been sent to Azkaban, that dank hole, but Narcissa had been cast in a dark hell of her own. She’d suffered in her own way – perhaps not as obviously as if she too had been imprisoned in the Dementor-infested pit, but she’d been damaged, nonetheless.

Fourteen years living a hollow life. Emotionless, unsatisfying sex with her husband – when he deigned to spend the night with his wife instead of his current paramour. Fourteen years of pretending to be the picture perfect couple for society, both sides of it. Pretending to be on the right side at the right time, usually forced to present a façade to hide their true allegiances to the Dark Lord, to protect themselves after his first fall. All pretend, every last minute of it for the past fourteen years.

Lucius: all blond and gold and male and empty and impure – every day with him, every night, sharing a bed, a room, a life (a lie) – had carved wounds in her soul, until she resembled one of Bella’s abandoned toys rather than a proper pure-blood witch.

Fourteen years of longing for the dark part of her heart – the Bellatrix-shaped part, the missing star in a constellation of crushing black holes.

Fourteen years of impurity.

But now Bellatrix has been returned to her, and Narcissa can feel again. Can live again.

Can be pure again.

Every orgasm she takes from her sister with her deft tongue, practiced lips, and sharp teeth, obliterates a day of Narcissa’s impure past. Bella’s moans of pleasure help erase the memory of Lucius, of his Malfoy taint, of his thrusting cock defiling her sacred body.

The love flashing in her sister’s black eyes, visible after every night with Narcissa in her bed – in her arms; between her legs – brings the blonde ever closer to reclaiming her pure Black ancestry, to losing the bad faith of her marital name.

For Narcissa was – is – must beToujours Pur.

This is how she stays pure. Trailing a slick path of kiss-bites down the column of Bella’s arched throat, between her luscious breasts, down to her dewy belly. She nibbles, alternating light and hard, around the entrance of Bella’s sex, layering pain and pleasure in the precise way that drives Bella to buck her straining hips against her sister’s face.

But Narcissa continues the erotic teasing, until threats fall like candy from her sister’s pomegranate-red lips, until the dark woman can’t take it anymore, and grabs the blonde’s head, a warning to get the fuck on with it. Narcissa’s wet lips close on her sister’s clit, grazing it with her teeth, swirling her tongue in the perfect way until Bella comes, writhing against her pale sister.

Both women pant, lost in the deliciousness and wickedness of the moment, until the dark sister wants more.

A crushing grip on her slim wrist pulls Narcissa up from her sister’s legs, until the two lie side by side. The blonde’s pink lips glisten; Bella kisses her, tasting the piquant salty-sweetness of her own climax, and then copper blood, when her teeth tear into her sister’s pouty bottom lip. She swallows and sucks hard on the bite; Narcissa’s squeals of pain are like a particularly fine vintage of wine, deep and rich on her tongue.

Her knee nudges her sister’s ivory-and-cream thighs apart, nestling for a moment in the blazing heat she finds there. Bella laughs, impishly, into her sister’s mouth, and then leaves the bruised and bloody lips alone in favor of licking along Narcissa’s earlobe. Slender fingers follow her knee, pushing roughly into her sister’s cunt, sliding in the abundance of wetness there; she whispers, “So hot, Cissy.”

Her little sister mewls, begging in a desperate whimper for her own moremoremore, but Bella’s teeth crunch into Narcissa’s ear – a love bite, really – before she says softly, “I think not.”

This is how she stays pure. Wrapped in her sister’s embrace, Bellatrix fully satiated and full of nefarious dreams, and she left smoldering with arousal, awake and thankful and pure.

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Date: 2010-08-08 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reg-flint.livejournal.com
Well written, excellent for a first femmeslash.
Toujours pur.
Incest in general is a big squick of mine, but I read it anyways.
Wicked job, really.


BTW...I know your answer but want as many of my flist as possible to fill out my one-question poll. Please vote.

The icon is designed to make any sensible Slytherin retch.

Date: 2010-08-08 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Voted :)

And thank you for reading, especially if it's a squick! It is for me too, but there's just something about pairing these two that doesn't bother me. They'll be showing up a lot more I imagine.

I was nervous - ugh when aren't I, what kind of Slytherin am I?! - on posting this. I've read it literally 40 times? So good feedback makes me soooooo happy!

Date: 2010-08-08 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reg-flint.livejournal.com
It's quite realistic, even if it squicks me all to hell.
My new journal style...I keep waffling...black and green or something less obvious? I don't need to scream "Salazar!" at the top of my lungs to prove my house. That is both content of character and choice, in some cases just one or another. I'm getting sick of my header. Advice?

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Date: 2010-08-08 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarysnapey.livejournal.com
Yay!

It's not like I've already said this five-zillion times... but I love this fic!

Date: 2010-08-10 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
And I love you for beta'ing and offering some excellent suggestions and encouraging me! Thank you!

Date: 2010-08-10 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musicffyou.livejournal.com
wow that was just amazing. Great work and thank you for posting

Date: 2010-08-10 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thank you! I was nervous, then figured what the hell, I'm going to post and spam it everywhere!
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Date: 2010-08-10 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
I love you too :D
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Date: 2010-08-10 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's so naughty, but so much fun.

Date: 2010-08-13 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prunesquallormd.livejournal.com
Oh ♥
This is just wonderful.
*sigh*

Date: 2010-08-14 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thank you! *grin* I gotta get to writing more, I just love these two.

Date: 2010-08-16 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Oh ♥! This was just gorgeous. Yum!

Date: 2010-08-16 05:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Hehe thanks for making your way over here!

And glad you liked! Must get some more written, these two are such fun.

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Date: 2010-08-16 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] opaljade.livejournal.com
Wowsie!

This was *hawt* and incredibly well written. I found this image particularly vivid: "until threats fall like candy from her sister’s pomegranate-red lips."
And the few lines that follow after that made me grin and admire your portrayal of Bellatrix: "until the dark woman can’t take it anymore, and grabs the blonde’s head, a warning to get the fuck on with it."

(Will go hunting for more of your fics later! I'm really not a fan of incest fics... bit you have such a nice way with words that I found this quite an enjoyable read!)

Date: 2010-08-17 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Ooh thank you! I admit, I don't really care for incest myself, but these two...idk. Just works for me, and it's fun (and difficult!) to write.

I am so happy you liked it, and thanks for letting me know what parts worked for you! I'm always curious as to what readers like the best.

Date: 2010-08-17 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damianjblack.livejournal.com
This is an awesome piece! I love your choice of wording :)

Date: 2010-08-17 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thank you, thank you!

Date: 2010-09-11 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prudence-3.livejournal.com
O.O *sputters nonsense before eventually gaining coherency*

Wow. Just, wow. Who is that manipulative? That dark, that mean. To think of this, then to write it so splendidly... Guh. I'm sorry, I can't find the words for this at the moment.

Date: 2010-09-11 10:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
:D I like rendering people incoherent. So thank you!

Are you saying Bella is manipulative for the way she treats Narcissa, or that I am?

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Date: 2011-01-31 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com
So sensual, that lovely combination of sweet and loving and oh so filthy. I adored this. ♥

Date: 2011-02-01 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Why thank you! This was my first femslash ever, and I still look back at it fondly.

Date: 2011-07-17 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themirrorofsin.livejournal.com
My heart is failing for all the squee. This is just perfect and your Narcissa is spot on.
Love it <3

Date: 2011-07-22 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dexstarr.livejournal.com
Thank you, that means a lot! :)

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