Fic: Blue

[dexstarr]

Title: Blue
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 150
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: femslash100 #290: Remainder, femslash100 #276: Ocean
Characters: Narcissa Malfoy/Astoria Greengrass
Warnings: Implied femmeslash.
Author's Note: I wrote this in a couple of minutes, and decided not to mess with or edit endlessly since it was exactly 150 words.
Disclaimer: HP and all assorted belong to JKR and are not mine.
Summary: Astoria has never seen anyone with such blue eyes.

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Astoria has never seen anyone with such blue eyes. At first, she wonders if Narcissa is using a cosmetics charm, but she immediately discards that possibility as vulgar. A woman as beautiful and as refined as Narcissa would never resort to such trickery.

She could lose herself in those blue eyes, and often does. After careful thought, she has decided that there are different shades of blue—the dark of the ocean, the light of the sky—intertwined, as is appropriate.

‘Astoria?’

‘Yes, Mrs Malfoy?’

‘Come here.’ Narcissa pats the settee, hand gracefully gesturing to the spot right beside her. Astoria’s heart flutters. ‘And call me Narcissa, darling.’

Her throat goes dry, but the name rolls off her tongue like a smooth wave. She has called it out at night, covers up to her chin, hand furtively buried between her thighs. ‘Yes, Narcissa,’ she says, and takes the first hopeful step forwards.



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Comments

[reg-flint.livejournal.com]

Definitely stay as is, good call, because it's enticing the way it is. I just want to stare into Naricssa's eyes now.

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

You're quick!

Thanks, glad you found it enticing. Trying to spark the muse back into cooperating, we'll see how it goes.

[starduchess.livejournal.com]

What a nice "first step" moment. I like the calmness of this scene. Very fitting for two high-born ladies.

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I wasn't sure how to end this, then that sentence came to mind, and I thought it was a good ending/beginning.

[deirdre-aithne.livejournal.com]

*melts* Oh, bb, I do love your femmeslash fics to pieces!

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's been a long time since I've touched these two.

[fiery-flamingo.livejournal.com]

I like the promise of things to come in this. I think your muse is doing wonderfully. :)

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Aww, thanks. I'm trying to spark the muse into cooperating some more, so I can get fest fics done!

[rosehiptea.livejournal.com]

Very sensual. I like it.

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[zofbadfaith.livejournal.com]

I love the pace you settled, it's very calm despite the anxiousness I feel from Astoria being in Narcissa's presence.

And Narcissa also seems very enticing, apparently without meaning to ;)

Very good, thanks for sharing :)

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Thank you! You got everything I was trying to convey. The Astoria in my head has quite a crush on her future mother-in-law, but she's too shy to say anything about it.

[musicffyou.livejournal.com]

wow that was short and amazing. I've never read something so fulfilling but only 150 words. Awesome!

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Awww, thank you! Means a lot :)

[amles80.livejournal.com]

Very beautiful, I love it.

[dexstarr.livejournal.com]

Thank you!